Feel Free to Get a Free Hugs (FINAL)

 

The Free Hugs Campaign is a social movement involving individuals who offer hugs to strangers in public places. The hugs are meant to be random acts of kindness, selfless acts performed just to make others feel better. OK, I want to tell story about free hugs.

There was a man who holds “free hugs” sign and walk away in the downtown, at first the people do not care and are not enthusiastic about the man, he was wearing a trouser and a coat, his hair too long. He also has a thick mustache. Maybe the people confused about his campaign and didn’t know his. People there only looked at him, sometimes they smile, just smile. The people let him walk away and did not care even though he “free hugs” sign. The man didn’t stop his campaign even though no one respect with him.

  The event begin when a grandmother who initially spoke with him and eventually grandmother was interested of the event and hugging him, and then from that incident a lot of people who are interested of the free hugs and turns hugging him. The man looked so happy because many people cares with him, but at the time police approached to the man and banned free hugs and next the man was looking for a signature to everyone for supporting his free hugs and want to prove that free hugs make the others feel better. They are many people interested and the man got 10.000 signatures. Wow! He was success. In the end the police permitted the man to continue his free hugs because the man successful and got so many respond. Everybody laugh, and looked very happy.

This story is very important for me, many people interesting with this campaign because I think a little hug can change our life and a free hugs is a symbolized of love. So let's get a free hugs today :)

Outline Paragraph “Free Hugs Campaign” by Wahyu Widiatmika

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The first time I watched this video I was very touched by what is done by the men. Starting from all the people who ignore and nobody care about long-haired man until the man got great sympathy which all who see it begin to take notice and embrace the man even more people are willing to follow him to conduct this campaign . It is a very moving piece. It was there that I began to think how important a hug and a sense of a hug. Togetherness is wonderful, we share, and we care about each other and remember that we live in this world alone. We're made ​​for each other, help each other not only self-serving. Up to the scene where police banned the campaign and the long-haired man explained the purpose of the activity and start again do it but now he's trying to ask all those who are willing to share hugs to provide signatures and target got 10 thousand signatures. And the man finally reached even the police who had been banned in the campaign is willing to embrace, this is awesome. And I can see that how to share happiness with others was very enjoyable. Leave the competition to share laughter and respect each other. Finally, this video is so great and it was so sweet. 

Title                             : Free Hugs Campaign

Topic Sentence            : The man got great sympathy.

a.       Major Supporting Sentence 1       :  Nobody care about long-haired man but at least the man git sympathy and follow him to conduct this campaign.

b.      Major Supporting Sentence 2       : A very moving piece.

c.       Major Supporting Sentence 3       : How important a hug and a sense of a hug.

d.      Major Supporting Sentence 4       : Togetherness is wonderful.

e.       Major Supporting Sentence 5       : Help each other not only self-serving.

f.       Major Supporting Sentence 6       : Police banned campaign but the man provides signatures and target got 10 thousand signatures.

g.      Major Supporting Sentence 7       : The man finally reached the signature.

h.      Major Supporting Sentence 8       : Share happiness with other was very enjoyable.

Concluding Sentence  : And I can see that how to share happiness with others was very enjoyable.

Comment                    : Nice writing, but its too short it’s make I very hard to find the major and the minor to supporting this sentence.

My Lovely Pink Room

Well, I want to describe my lovely room. Yes, I usually call "Pink Room" because my favorite color is pink and I want to add something pink in my room that's why my father changed the color of the walls from white become pink. OK, let's go to the topic that I want to describe. 

When I feel bored or when I want to be alone, I find my peace in my room, that's why I call my room is my heave too. My room is between the room of my parents and brothers room. My room is a bit large, in here I have everything I need, there is no balcony and AC but this is my favorite room. In my room the bed is right by the door. On the bed there are 4 pillows, pink blanket and also a big duck doll who often sleep with me. On the bed I usually listening to music and take a nap, hmm probably read some novels too. Beside my bed there is alarm clock is always accurate. In my room there are table, chairs, closet, cupboard,and so on. I set walls sticker on the walls to make my room beautiful. On the tables there are white lamp, laptop, book, and something. On the walls hanging a lot of photos with my family, friends and my boyfriend. 

In my room,I spend a lot of time and it is my pleasure. Everything in here I site by my idea. OK then, That's is my room, and how about yours? Can you describe your room too? hehe :p

And this is the picture of my beautiful room :)

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Feel Free to Get a Free Hugs

The Free Hugs Campaign is a social movement involving individuals who offer hugs to strangers in public places. The hugs are meant to be random acts of kindness, selfless acts performed just to make others feel better. In this video there are a man who hold sign “free hugs” and walk away in the downtown, at first the people do not care and are not enthusiastic about the man, the people let him walk away and did not care even though he hold sign “free hugs”. The event begin when a grandmother who initially spoke with him and eventually grandmother was interested of the event and hugging him, and then from that incident a lot of people who are interested of the free hugs and turns hugging him. The man looks so happy because many people cares with him, but at the time police went to the man and banned free hugs and next the man was looking for a signature to everyone for supporting his free hugs and want to prove that free hugs make the others feel better. They are many people interested and the man got 10.000 signatures. Wow ! He was succeed ! and in the end the police pemited the man to continue his free hugs because the man successful and got so many respond . This video are very important and so many people interesting with this sign and make the people cares because a little hug can changed our life and a free hugs is symbolized of  love. So let's get a free hugs today :)

Link the video :

http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=vr3x_RRJdd4&noredirect=1

how to clean your messy room after the party

Messy rooms don't contribute to good sleeping, you will feel uncomfortable when your room's dirty, and you probably don't either. So this is the steps how to clean your messy room and make you to sleep better after the party.
First, collect bottles, cups, and glasses. Look for spills and deal with them right away. Next, arrange the things in your messy room, and put it in the right place, and then sweep to clean your room and the last set the carpet to make your room look so clean. That is the way to clean your messy room, hope you do it well and good luck ;)