Outline Paragraph “Free Hugs Campaign” by Wahyu Widiatmika

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The first time I watched this video I was very touched by what is done by the men. Starting from all the people who ignore and nobody care about long-haired man until the man got great sympathy which all who see it begin to take notice and embrace the man even more people are willing to follow him to conduct this campaign . It is a very moving piece. It was there that I began to think how important a hug and a sense of a hug. Togetherness is wonderful, we share, and we care about each other and remember that we live in this world alone. We're made ​​for each other, help each other not only self-serving. Up to the scene where police banned the campaign and the long-haired man explained the purpose of the activity and start again do it but now he's trying to ask all those who are willing to share hugs to provide signatures and target got 10 thousand signatures. And the man finally reached even the police who had been banned in the campaign is willing to embrace, this is awesome. And I can see that how to share happiness with others was very enjoyable. Leave the competition to share laughter and respect each other. Finally, this video is so great and it was so sweet. 

Title                             : Free Hugs Campaign

Topic Sentence            : The man got great sympathy.

a.       Major Supporting Sentence 1       :  Nobody care about long-haired man but at least the man git sympathy and follow him to conduct this campaign.

b.      Major Supporting Sentence 2       : A very moving piece.

c.       Major Supporting Sentence 3       : How important a hug and a sense of a hug.

d.      Major Supporting Sentence 4       : Togetherness is wonderful.

e.       Major Supporting Sentence 5       : Help each other not only self-serving.

f.       Major Supporting Sentence 6       : Police banned campaign but the man provides signatures and target got 10 thousand signatures.

g.      Major Supporting Sentence 7       : The man finally reached the signature.

h.      Major Supporting Sentence 8       : Share happiness with other was very enjoyable.

Concluding Sentence  : And I can see that how to share happiness with others was very enjoyable.

Comment                    : Nice writing, but its too short it’s make I very hard to find the major and the minor to supporting this sentence.