Narration : My Turning Point

                          My Turning Point

                Imagine when you feeling hopeless and scared. That was about 7 years ago when I was in junior high school. I must admit that I was not a brightest student in the class, my bed result of final test made me know that I was a stupid student. I saw the score of my friends, they got a high score. How stupid am I? From this moment, I was very motivated, I decide to got a better score next semester. I will prove that I will get a high score.

                I was not a good student, I got a low score on final test and it made me felt shy. I felt shy with my self and also with my friend who got a high score. Beside that, I felt envy too because I can’t be my friend who has a good brain. I still hate myself, I always lost my focus in class and I felt no confident. I wanted to be my classmates and really pay attention with the lesson in class but I still failed to do so. Now, I set my goals. This was my motivation. I will get a high score next semester. I believe I can do that.

                My friends result was my motivation. I usually ask to my self, why I can’t be like them? Yeah, started from now I will more focus on the lesson and tried to understanding the lesson. Even it was so hard, but I believe that I can. My motivation really helped me to focus and mush my self harder.

                The final test in next semester was come. I answered the question with my confident. I never think about the result, I just do my best and tried to forget about my mistake in the past. When my teacher announces the result of final test, I couldn’t believe that my score was far better. I got third rank in my class and it was so surprised me. I proud my self because the result not makes me disappointed. I promise that I will be better again.

                Here is my important turning point in my life. I’m glad to learn from my mistakes because I believe that it will be teach me to be more active in the class. This turning point in my life will have an impact on me to be a diligent student.

Narration : Dance Competition

Dance Competition

                A while ago, my dance team “Talenta” participated in DBL Dance competition Bali in Denpasar. We were as a represented of our school to join the biggest dance competition in Bali. I practiced so hard with my teacher for a month. We also prepared the best costume and property that we used later. The day was come, we went to Denpasar with our motivation to do our best in that event. I miss the day when we in crowded situation on back stage, perform on the stage with our best performance, and until the result was announce by the presenter. I miss the moment so much.

                The competition would start in an hour. We went to the backstage and prepared our self in there. My teacher helped me to do a make up and wearing the costume. We spent almost an hour for preparation. After that, we did a stretching in the corner of the room. Our number was about to start in a few minutes. We were really nervous. My teachers told me that everything was alright and do our best.

                The time came to us to perform on the stage. There were three judges and about two hundred people watching me. I tried to forgot about nervous and be confident. I was so afraid to make a mistake and forgot the choreography, but I knew I had to do this. It was what I love to do. We have been working so long and hard for this moment, because of that we must do our best. I was trying to calm down and after that I was glad when it ended smoothly.

                After perform, we waited for the announcement of the result. I was so impatient to hear the result, and surprise,  I still couldn’t believe when they called Talenta as the first winner. We were screaming spontaneously. We were so happy to be given the trophy and finally we back to Singaraja with this trophy.

                In the end, we back to Singaraja. We were so tired. However, we were satisfied because our effort was not useless.

descriptive text : My Bestie

                                                    My Best Friend

                What do you think about best friend? Do you have a best friend? Who is your best friend? Friend is very important for me. Friend is a person who is sharing my mood with me whenever I’m happy or sad. We have been a friend for 9 years. Yes, I found “her” my really best friend who has good appearance, responsibility and can understand me well.

                Susan is my best friend. She is forth semester student in Accounting Department Ganesha University. She is cute, good looking and very beautiful. She has a good smile, narrow eyes and short hair. When you see her at first time you might think she is an ordinary girl but for me she is an attractive girl.

                In addition, Susan is responsible person. She always finished her work on time. In senior high school, she joined organization and that made her very responsible because she always doing so many works in that organization. She always takes care of her job very well.

                Well, Susan is a good friend for me. She is the person who cares with me. She is always beside me when I feel alone and she will help me every time when I got a problem. She will give me some advice and help me to solve the problem. I think, I really lucky to have a best friend like Susan. I’m very happy we are friend and I hope we will be friend forever.

                I think Susan is very nice friend. She has a nice appearance, personality, and she can understand me well. She is cute, responsible, and always cares with me. She is important for me and I’m very happy that I can be friend with her.

Descriptive text : My Lovely Mother

         My Lovely Mother

My mother is my inspiration woman, she is important influence in my life. My mother is the person that I admire the most. Even though she is 41 years old, she is still young, she is like mu younger sister. I want to be like her, who has good looking, good attitude and perfect for me.

My mother is tall and has a black hair. She is very beautiful for me, she also has black eyes and flat nose. She always do traditional treatment at home to make her face flawless and kills the acne on her face with tomato every day, I think, that makes her face flawless and very shinning.

I am a lucky girl who has a best mother in the world. She is everything for me. She always support me in every activities that I do, for the example my hobby is dancing so my mother always follow me when I join dance competition and waiting me till the end of the event. She is always with me whenever I’m happy or sad. She is like my friend. She is a helpful person. She usually helps my neighbor when they want to borrow something about kitchen tools. She also a responsible person, and very diligent, everyday she cooking for my family and clean the home everyday because she is a wife house. I’m proud to be her daughter.

My mother is an angel for me. She always teaches me to be a better person. She caring with me and help me when I have a hard problem in my life. Everyday, I sharing a problem with my mother about my education, my friends and also about my boyfriend she will listen to me and give me a solution about my problem.  I love the way she treat me. When I have a mistake, she is always angry with me and told me to never do the mistake again. She is very perfect for me. She always there for me and always keep me whenever and wherever I go.

I don’t know how to say thank to my mother. I love my mother very much and I know she loves me too. If, I have chance to be born again, I want to be her daughter again. I’m lucky to have a beautiful, good personality and perfect mother.