My Turning Point
Imagine
when you feeling hopeless and scared. That was about 7 years ago when I was in
junior high school. I must admit that I was not a brightest student in the
class, my bed result of final test made me know that I was a stupid student. I
saw the score of my friends, they got a high score. How stupid am I? From this
moment, I was very motivated, I decide to got a better score next semester. I
will prove that I will get a high score.
I was
not a good student, I got a low score on final test and it made me felt shy. I
felt shy with my self and also with my friend who got a high score. Beside
that, I felt envy too because I can’t be my friend who has a good brain. I
still hate myself, I always lost my focus in class and I felt no confident. I
wanted to be my classmates and really pay attention with the lesson in class
but I still failed to do so. Now, I set my goals. This was my motivation. I
will get a high score next semester. I believe I can do that.
My
friends result was my motivation. I usually ask to my self, why I can’t be like
them? Yeah, started from now I will more focus on the lesson and tried to
understanding the lesson. Even it was so hard, but I believe that I can. My
motivation really helped me to focus and mush my self harder.
The
final test in next semester was come. I answered the question with my
confident. I never think about the result, I just do my best and tried to
forget about my mistake in the past. When my teacher announces the result of
final test, I couldn’t believe that my score was far better. I got third rank
in my class and it was so surprised me. I proud my self because the result not
makes me disappointed. I promise that I will be better again.
Here is
my important turning point in my life. I’m glad to learn from my mistakes
because I believe that it will be teach me to be more active in the class. This
turning point in my life will have an impact on me to be a diligent student.
A good story Wida, but I think you should pay more attention in your diction, and also grammar such as I found "my bed result of final test" do you mean "my bad result?' , 'I decide to got a better score next semester' If I not mistaken it should be 'I decided to go' and many more left :D
BalasHapusbut overall, this is a good story ^^