Selasa, 27 Mei 2014

Narration : Dance Competition



Dance Competition



                A while ago, my dance team “Talenta” participated in DBL Dance competition Bali in Denpasar. We were as a represented of our school to join the biggest dance competition in Bali. I practiced so hard with my teacher for a month. We also prepared the best costume and property that we used later. The day was come, we went to Denpasar with our motivation to do our best in that event. I miss the day when we in crowded situation on back stage, perform on the stage with our best performance, and until the result was announce by the presenter. I miss the moment so much.



                The competition would start in an hour. We went to the backstage and prepared our self in there. My teacher helped me to do a make up and wearing the costume. We spent almost an hour for preparation. After that, we did a stretching in the corner of the room. Our number was about to start in a few minutes. We were really nervous. My teachers told me that everything was alright and do our best.



                The time came to us to perform on the stage. There were three judges and about two hundred people watching me. I tried to forgot about nervous and be confident. I was so afraid to make a mistake and forgot the choreography, but I knew I had to do this. It was what I love to do. We have been working so long and hard for this moment, because of that we must do our best. I was trying to calm down and after that I was glad when it ended smoothly.



                After perform, we waited for the announcement of the result. I was so impatient to hear the result, and surprise,  I still couldn’t believe when they called Talenta as the first winner. We were screaming spontaneously. We were so happy to be given the trophy and finally we back to Singaraja with this trophy.



                In the end, we back to Singaraja. We were so tired. However, we were satisfied because our effort was not useless.

1 komentar:

  1. Your story is great. congratulation Wida, you won that competition.
    But sorry to say there are some mistakes in sentence :
    "There were three judges and about two hundred people watching me"
    the word " watching" should be changed with the past form or you give to be "were" because your story was already done.
    "In the end, we back to Singaraja"
    The word "back" should be changed with the past form too.

    BalasHapus