Narration : Dance Competition
Dance Competition
A while
ago, my dance team “Talenta” participated in DBL Dance competition Bali in
Denpasar. We were as a represented of our school to join the biggest dance
competition in Bali. I practiced so hard with my teacher for a month. We also
prepared the best costume and property that we used later. The day was come, we
went to Denpasar with our motivation to do our best in that event. I miss the
day when we in crowded situation on back stage, perform on the stage with our
best performance, and until the result was announce by the presenter. I miss
the moment so much.
The
competition would start in an hour. We went to the backstage and prepared our
self in there. My teacher helped me to do a make up and wearing the costume. We
spent almost an hour for preparation. After that, we did a stretching in the
corner of the room. Our number was about to start in a few minutes. We were
really nervous. My teachers told me that everything was alright and do our
best.
The
time came to us to perform on the stage. There were three judges and about two
hundred people watching me. I tried to forgot about nervous and be confident. I
was so afraid to make a mistake and forgot the choreography, but I knew I had
to do this. It was what I love to do. We have been working so long and hard for
this moment, because of that we must do our best. I was trying to calm down and
after that I was glad when it ended smoothly.
After
perform, we waited for the announcement of the result. I was so impatient to
hear the result, and surprise, I still
couldn’t believe when they called Talenta as the first winner. We were
screaming spontaneously. We were so happy to be given the trophy and finally we
back to Singaraja with this trophy.
In the
end, we back to Singaraja. We were so tired. However, we were satisfied because
our effort was not useless.
Your story is great. congratulation Wida, you won that competition.
BalasHapusBut sorry to say there are some mistakes in sentence :
"There were three judges and about two hundred people watching me"
the word " watching" should be changed with the past form or you give to be "were" because your story was already done.
"In the end, we back to Singaraja"
The word "back" should be changed with the past form too.